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    Jr. Celion
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    Just some random girl I drew

    Having scanner problems, so this is a phone picture lol
    http://imgur.com/IRrCQ

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    [/COLOR]tell me what you think :)
    Last edited by Envy; 09-12-2012 at 07:19 AM.

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    Papa Pixie
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    Don't see a picture at all (?)
    Try make a puu.sh link or Tinyurl of it with imageshack or some other upload program

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    Jr. Celion
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    i edited it with a URL link instead. This damn computer doesnt seem to let me use BB coding much successfully

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    lets see if tinyurl makes it work

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    Celebrate!
Gift received at 08-14-2012, 10:22 AM from KremeChoco
    Nice! But some inputs:
    1) Work on your anatomy :3 For example the fingers, if you look at your own fingers, you can see there are 3 parts. In your drawing you only drew 2, so it's too short.
    2) The shoulder on < side is a bit off. I THINK it should be placed a little bit higher and the line from her boob shouldn't be too close to the outer line of the arm.
    3) And omfg her eyes are so pretty ㅠㅠ

    I'm not a pro myself but these are what I think can be used to improve your drawings :3 Other that that she's really pretty
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Gift received at 12-20-2012, 05:28 AM from Star
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Gift received at 08-14-2012, 10:22 AM from KremeChoco
    This is alright, but you might wanna be careful of
    1) Head shape: Imo, the head and face are too...triangular? It's not natural at all to me
    2) Hair flow: I don't see any hair flow. Especially the hair on left side, why isn't it jumbled a bit to the side of the face?

    Just my 2 cents.

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    Jr. Celion
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    Lol thanks for the constructive critism :) i will work on the anatomy (i knew something was wrong with the fingers, and i couldnt quite get the hair down, but it is falling becuase she is supposed to be at an angle. I did not demonstrate this well, she is leaning to the left, so her hair is hanging down that way)

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    and the face isnt a traingle, her hand is covering the rounded part of it, if you look closely. BTW, I am 14.

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    Orange Mushroom
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    I find the body position to be really off, and the features to be somewhat angular and the hair to be somewhat... all over the place? And the arms too small and the neck to be... deformed? But I really like the eyes, well, you know ;). Not trying to be mean, just hopefully nudging, or shoving (LOL) you in the right direction, keep it up though.

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Gift received at 12-20-2012, 02:44 AM from Justin
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Gift received at 08-14-2012, 10:22 AM from KremeChoco
    Cool drawing! :P
    The eyes are beautiful imo.
    But as people already said, the head is pretty triangular (it sort of reminds me of Michael Jackson o.O)
    The fingers and the nose aren't so realistic, so yea work on them.
    (I'm not an expert, barely an amateur, so I hope I could be a bit of helpful)
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    nice picture i see before

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    very nice picture i suggest that the skin color should be pale because she looks like she's sad

 

 
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