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    Trance Artwork

    Well, I rarely use my Photoshop for any Graphics so I won't show my Graphic skills here. Instead, I like to draw and I would like you guys to comment and criticize on it at the same time.

    I'm not sure of this but I'll open some slots to draw some of the characters in Leafre community. We'll see how my life went.

    My tools vary time to time. It might be a pencil, a pen, a highlighter (attempt to do one), pen + highlighter, pens, watercolour, etc.
    I only learn drawing anime and started illustrate some real life people.

    So, before I post some heavy image (mostly will be cropped via Instagram as I upload them there), let's have some rules getting announced in this thread:
    • All repliers must obey the Leafre's Artwork Section rules.
    • This is a varied DIY thread. So, there'll be PS works, Drawings, etc. here. I don't want to confuse you guys.
    • If there's anything, don't hesitate to send me a Private Message. (English or Chinese)
    • If I ruined your mood, I'm sorry! :)
    • As a replier, I respect your replying rights. But please do not abuse it, okay?
    • My strong point is drawing, I believe, that's why I'm shaping that. At the same time, I MIGHT scan my artworks into my PC. Due to the large size of the artwork, I have to minimise it and upload to a MDS (Media Upload Site).So, you'll have to click on links to view them. This point, I'm terribly sorry.


    Here's the artwork:





    More will be updated in the future!

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    I like a 4th one a lot.
    But the eyes and mouth seem a bit off.
    And what's that in the 3rd picture?

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    2nd & 4th, I honestly wish I could draw like you, I choose music instead of art because I'm bad at art even though I hate music :/

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    2nd one, the right side seems to be disproportionate a bit, i really like the others though, especially the first one.

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    Liked all of them, 1 and 3rd especially. But in the second one, her left eye is a little disproportionate, and in the 4th one, the eyes, the mouth and nose seem really weird, sorry. But the hair and the head format is quite good.

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    You need to work on proportions, there's some very glaring proportion problems with 2 and 4. idk what number 1 is supposed to be, as it's rather messy.

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    the chins and the noses seems a little disproportionate on them. although, nice shadings. I shoud probably use pencils more like you but I tend to go for mechnical pencils :/
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Gift received at 08-14-2012, 10:22 AM from KremeChoco
    I might as well address each image individually.

    The first one is decent, not my type of thing really. The nose on it is REALLY off. It kinda looks like you were trying to draw a bandana on his head and some sort of mask on his chin. If I'm seeing it correctly, you should try to draw both of them with more of a similar texture, otherwise they just look off.

    The second one is quite possibly the best of the bunch. It has a sort of prettiness to it that a lot of drawings don't have. However, it is not without flaws. The nose and the ears on it look kinda off. The ears look a tad lopsided and the nose looks too big. Or just not the right nose for her. Remember that girls usually have much softer and smaller features than guys do. Try drawing the noses a big smaller and a bit softer. It kinda looks like you're trying to draw a man's nose on a woman's face. Also, the arm should be lightly shaded. The face is ever so slightly shaded in, and it looks like it should be around the same texture and design as the arm, so unless you were going for a shadow effect that's only effecting the face, lightly shade in the arm as well. It looks a tad awkward as it is.

    The third one... uh... the fuck is it? Kinda hard to comment on it when I don't know what it is. It's either REALLY awesome, or REALLY stupid. Gonna hope that it's the first one. I like it in general, especially with how creepy it is in comparison to your other drawings. Depending on what it is though, the main tale in the back, the one that looks like a whale's tale, looks kinda out of place. For the type of design that you're going for, I feel like it should be a bit more creepy. Perhaps it could be spikey or ragged. It feels like it just doesn't fit in with the rest of the chaotic creature. I love the main part of the creature though. The drooling, the teeth, and the eyes all have a great effect on the drawing as a whole.

    The fourth one... Have you heard of the uncanny valley? Well, I suppose that I should explain it just in case you haven't. When you see something that doesn't look too much like a human, like a robot, you're not going to be particularly scared by the image alone. Similarly, if you see something that's AMAZINGLY similar, like another human, or a sculpture of a human, you're not going to be scared either. However, there's this certain area in-between where things are very similar to what humans look like, but they're just a little bit off. This little bit that's off causes you to be creeped out. Your fourth image fits in that uncanncy valley. All of the features of the drawing look beautiful individually, however when put together they look rather weird. The eyes are a bit too anime-ish and are a bit too big for the rest of the face. The nose, as I said about your second drawing, is too big and too manly for the woman's face. The mouth and the hair for the most part look fine. The neck looks like it's being extended, bent, and twisted. Try to make it a tad shorter and a tad less bent, that would help a lot. Then there's the shape of the face. It's kinda weird. In some places it's round and looks nice, while in others it looks like it was made out of straight lines. It's as if you couldn't make up your mind on what style to use with her. Try to keep a constant style on the entire drawing like you've done with the rest. With some tweaks, it could look great.

    Overall your drawings are pretty damned good, but they each could use some tweaking. If I was to rate them from favorite to leave favorite, I'd have to order them like this. 3, 2, 4, 1. Keep up the good work!\


    Edit (before the remakes): I just noticed that your first drawing has a blue eye. It's an interesting touch, but it doesn't really fit with the rest of the drawing.
    Last edited by Vegito; 07-09-2013 at 05:16 PM.

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    Finally, some time to thank you guys! I'll work hard! :DD
    I'll correct my mistakes and show to you guys again! :DD
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    Wow they are the amazing...4 is incredible :O

 

 

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