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    Yuno from Mirai Nikki

    Not too long ago i drew Yuno from Mirai nikki and i am actually very proud of this even tho i tried it in a different style

    Here it is:
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Gift received at 08-14-2012, 10:22 AM from KremeChoco
    *sigh* I hate to be mean, but it sucks. I mean you look like you have potential, but it just looks WAY outta wack.The face just looks weird, like creepy weird, which doesn't fit in with the sweet tone of her body or the background. It just looks poorly drawn. The body itself looks half decent. The arms and shoulders look crooked and a bit rough. And worst of all are the breasts. They're pointy... and the points are going outwards, towards the sides. It just looks weird. Sony, you look like you might be able to one day be a pretty good artist, but that drawing is just... bad. There's no other word for it. If it was meant to be weird and creepy, it doesn't look like it was meant to be, it just looks sloppy.

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    Well thanks alot, this took me like, 2 hours to draw, and tbh i think its fine and the face is fine. I accept critique but i was just trying a different style with the face but i do accept, the body sucks, im not very good at bodies T.T
    And yes, the background is supposed to be creepy and stuff because she's a yandere.

    But really, saying it sucks is just out of order :I
    Last edited by Sora; 01-16-2013 at 02:40 PM.

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Gift received at 08-14-2012, 10:22 AM from KremeChoco
    Quote Originally Posted by Katzorniku View Post
    But really, saying it sucks is just out of order :I
    1) Don't double post
    2) You posted your art online, which obviously is asking us to critique your work. I didn't attack your drawing, I shared my honest opinion.

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Gift received at 08-14-2012, 10:22 AM from KremeChoco
    The drawing in of itself is pretty good, I have to say, but the face has some big problems.
    The eyes are perfectly fine and well done, but the chin is really... off. It also kinda looks like she has a moustache and/or a mini-goatee.
    The rest of the drawing is well done (except for the pointy-ish boobs), and I look forward to seeing some improvements and/or future works!

    Props to NwaDeKoko for the signature~

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    Ah art, how I love doing it so much even though I suck at it (you can see how bad I am in my request section and pokemon thread in the art section) Anywho time to critique your drawing.
    Okay so those eyes, now I understand you said you're trying a new style and that's fine! But when drawing a character belonging to something else, try to stay in that style because a different style may make it look odd! OR it could be fitting. Breasts are very strange o.o, study anatomy and keep practicing and you'll get the hang of it! The nose looks kind of strange, and I honestly can't tell where the mouth is.
    Pro tip: Practice tutorials. Try to even make your own tutorials on drawing! Many people say if you make a tutorial it does actually help your drawing more and I've seen that myself! I'm not saying it improves you a lot more but hey, if you want to draw really professionally the lowest amount of improvement counts! I see potential in you, there's art potential in EVERYONE, but you have to be determined to keep drawing to get better because practice = perfect! Eventually you will be able to draw so well people will request drawings from you. But for now keep practicing! Good luck c:
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    Er .. Try not to take critique, opinions, or feedback too seriously, okay? It happens, but it helps because it'll get you to try harder to improve art. I've been drawing anime/manga for 5 years, critique and practice really pays off.
    So anyhow, I agree with most of the feedback up above and that you shouldn't be so sad of. With an attitude or degrading of how you draw won't really get you anywhere. Look at references, it can be simple as visiting zerochan.net, watching anime, reading manga, or even looking at other's art piece. :)

    Practice everyday! And if you have an apple device, please take a gander at an app called, "PaigeeWorld - How to draw Manga" That app can help you draw better, and from what I see, people had already improve way better than they actually did within 1-2 years! I highly suggest this. You can buy tutorials on drawing something step by step. You can also get critique from there, sometimes moderators will squeeze in time to feature your art for hundreds of people to see. :)
    Last edited by sweetserenity; 04-06-2013 at 07:31 PM.

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    not bad nice draw

 

 

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