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    Hello!

    Hello, my name is Kris!
    Things I hate: The dark.
    Things I like: Food
    Those are only some things and
    I hope to get to know you guys ^.^
    Last edited by XxxCris9xxX; 03-14-2012 at 02:59 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by XxxCris9xxX View Post
    Hello my name is Kris!
    Things I hate: When people have bad English typing grammar.
    Things I like: Food
    Those are only some things and
    I hope to get to know you guys ^.^
    Grammatical errors spotted.

    Hello my name is Kris!
    Hello, my name is Kris!

    Things I hate: When people have bad English typing grammar.
    Things I hate: When people type English with bad grammar.

    Those are only some things and
    I hope to get to know you guys ^.^
    Those are only some things, and I hope to get to know you guys ^.^

    If you're going to state something, make sure you back it up with evidence.

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    Then read this: http://goo.gl/W16qD

    Unless you want me to find you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by wolfraven View Post
    grammatical errors spotted.

    Hello my name is kris!
    Hello, my name is kris!

    Things i hate: When people have bad english typing grammar.
    Things i hate: When people type english with bad grammar.

    Those are only some things and
    i hope to get to know you guys ^.^
    those are only some things, and i hope to get to know you guys ^.^

    if you're going to state something, make sure you back it up with evidence.

    Follow the arrows on the picture.
    picture



    then read this: http://goo.gl/w16qd

    unless you want me to find you.
    lol someone caught it sweet!
    anyways did I do something bad?
    Last edited by XxxCris9xxX; 03-13-2012 at 11:22 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by XxxCris9xxX View Post
    lol someone caught it sweet!
    anyways did I do something bad?
    Yes, you said you liked grammar. All I see are grammatical errors.

    lol someone caught it sweet!
    anyways did I do something bad?

    The first sentence shouldn't have both "lol" and "sweet" in it. It's like saying, "Hey, Mike, hello." It works in normal speech due to irregularities and variables, but it would have more punctuation inside of it such as "Hey, Mike- Hello" as if you were saying hi and then saw someone else.

    Therefore sentence should most likely be: Someone caught it, sweet!

    As for the second sentence, you forgot punctuation.

    anyways did I do something bad?

    It should be written as one of the following:

    Anyways, did I do anything wrong?
    Anyways, did I do something wrong?

    Don't say you like grammar while taking a poop on it.
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    And that's WolfRaven to you, Kris


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    Quote Originally Posted by AZ_Sunny View Post
    And that's WolfRaven to you, Kris
    Sweet! Then I think he/she is pretty cool!

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    Quote Originally Posted by XxxCris9xxX View Post
    Sweet! Then I think he/she is pretty cool!
    @WolfRaven
    I think that's kinda funny, Kris LOL


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    Welcome to leafre!
    We are very happy to have you part of this community and we are happy to see that you are enthusiastic about Leafre.
    However, some people tend to break the rules on accident so if you would be kind enough to read the rules by following the link below
    http://leafre.net/misc.php?do=vsarules

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    Quote Originally Posted by Depression View Post
    Welcome to leafre!
    We are very happy to have you part of this community and we are happy to see that you are enthusiastic about Leafre.
    However, some people tend to break the rules on accident so if you would be kind enough to read the rules by following the link below
    http://leafre.net/misc.php?do=vsarules
    Thanks! I added the link as a bookmark.

 

 

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