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    First MapleStory Commentary!

    Hey guys hope you like my first ever commentary and I will definitely post more, I really hope you guys hit that subscribe button, really drives me to post more:



    I use Fraps to record btw

    Leave some tips and what I should do to do better. (Constructive criticism and not just hate comments, it's my first one, give me a shot c:)

    Also suggestions for videos are taken aswell @Vegito you kinda inspired me, thx
    Last edited by MapleTryHard; 06-22-2013 at 02:59 AM.

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    The Screen is quite blurry no offence. But it's Fraps so I can't blame you
    Oh Hi There ;)

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    Quote Originally Posted by 21is21 View Post
    The Screen is quite blurry no offence. But it's Fraps so I can't blame you
    I know but if you play in HD on Youtube it's not :)

    Also @Baka , Would be awesome if you could make me a youtube banner, PM me if you can. c:
    Last edited by MapleTryHard; 06-22-2013 at 02:36 AM.

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    @Integrity That's a nice first video ;P I'm happy to see that I inspired someone else to do some videos xD Anyhow, just some critics.

    1) Try to make your voice a little bit more clear. I'm not sure if it was you or your recording device, but your voice sounded a little big clogged up, making it a little bit hard to understand everything that you were saying.
    2) Try to make sure that you know what you're talking about. Being that you aren't showing your face on screen, you could have a script beside you, or at least an outline in order to keep you on track and running smoothly.
    3) if you're going to have Maplestory open, maybe you could play it so that there's something visually enticing to compliment your interesting commentary.

    Overall, great first video. Keep it up. Perhaps I can learn from you ;P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Integrity View Post
    Hey guys hope you like my first ever commentary and I will definitely post more, I really hope you guys hit that subscribe button, really drives me to post more:



    I use Fraps to record btw

    Leave some tips and what I should do to do better. (Constructive criticism and not just hate comments, it's my first one, give me a shot c:)

    Also suggestions for videos are taken aswell @Vegito you kinda inspired me, thx
    Why not KMS?

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    I watched the video and to be quite honest, it was pretty good. There were a few problems with it though
    1. The screen was a little blurry. Not that big of a deal in my opinion though.
    2. It sounded like you were kind of lost at times.
    3. I don't think many people find it entertaining too much to stare the background and whatnot. Try commentating alongside some game play such as boss runs, grinding at lhc or something, etc.
    If you can practice working on these i can feel like you're going to be a pretty good commentator

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vegito View Post
    @Integrity That's a nice first video ;P I'm happy to see that I inspired someone else to do some videos xD Anyhow, just some critics.

    1) Try to make your voice a little bit more clear. I'm not sure if it was you or your recording device, but your voice sounded a little big clogged up, making it a little bit hard to understand everything that you were saying.
    2) Try to make sure that you know what you're talking about. Being that you aren't showing your face on screen, you could have a script beside you, or at least an outline in order to keep you on track and running smoothly.
    3) if you're going to have Maplestory open, maybe you could play it so that there's something visually enticing to compliment your interesting commentary.

    Overall, great first video. Keep it up. Perhaps I can learn from you ;P
    Yeah I was planning of pre-recording the gameplay and then add in commentary. But thanks for the suggestion. And yeah even my mom says my voice is fked up i guess its still puberty -.-

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    Quote Originally Posted by Epsilon View Post
    Why not KMS?
    I'm going to do Both c:

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    i dont love xbox more T_T going to playstation on this generation ;)

 

 

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