I'm going to post up the lyrics to my own made songs in this topic. Please feel free to comment on them. This is a metalcore/deathcore band known as Gale Of Blades so if you don't like metal then you should probably not read it.

Song 1:
Suffrage - Gale Of Blades


Black tides and windpanes
Gives me quite a bloodied stain
Hurricanes and toxins flow
Killing everyone you know

Pure white blackness
Evergrowing sadness
I cried every night and day for them
So rescue them from their sin

Plastered red on the wall
Just waiting for a God to fall
A refuge for the refugees
So pray to nothing on your knees

Picturesque families living in wealth
The rest are abandoned with no health
I cried every day and night for us
Why must we give into our lust?


[Chorus]:
The eternal suffrage of our own kind
As twisted as thoughts from all of our minds

We don't even care
Who would even dare

To save those without and take from those with
The peace and happiness they don't deserve

Help the cause or you shall fall
Off your throne and lose all

[End Chorus]
{Screams/Growls}:

God save us all or stay the hell away
Is this the horrid price we pay?
Black gold in seas below
Ruins every ocean known

Flames of your eternal wrath
Is more complex than high school math
Are we forced under
To die as we plunder

We lost our peace the moment you set foot on the Earth
Unleashing your sinister girth of death
Angels falling ever so fragile
People become more agile

As they prepare to war against our deities
Whom hath destroyed all of our cities
Silencing all of our young
Blinding all of the unsung

[Chorus]:
The eternal suffrage of our own kind
As twisted as thoughts from all of our minds

We don't even care
Who would even dare

To save those without and take from those with
The peace and happiness they don't deserve

Help the cause or you shall fall
Off your throne and lose it all


[End Chorus]
{Screams/Growls}:

It is time...
To say goodbye...
To all...
Who have helped our life...

Why?! Why must we fall in the daylight
Drowning in all our plight
Falling from great heights
Losing all of our might

I tried so hard to save us all from a Hell unwanted
They all just sat there and flaunted
Their riches and their happiness
Leaving us with sadness

Desecrating the graves that once were
Could we ever want any more
As we shift gears into overdrive
Sacrifice all our lives

[Chorus]:
The eternal suffrage of our own kind
As twisted as thoughts from all of our minds

We don't even care
Who would even dare

To save those without and take from those with
The peace and happiness they don't deserve

Help the cause or you shall fall
Off your throne and lose it all

[End Chorus]

Off your throne and lose it all...

Shadows plague my vision
Go ahead and make the decision
To take away our strife
To eradicate all with a knife

Peaceless hand-me-downs
Leaves without a sound
Priceless pictures and hope
Leaves no time to sit and mope

If you think you will survive...
Then you best be prepared to die...

*Scream*
{Screams/Growls}:
All my life
Has been taken by this knife
The hapless victims of your creed
As I go to plant the seed of hope

Take one step closer and....

[Chorus Type 2]:
Die in the name of yourself
Take the poison of the shelf
Visions plague my head and mind
Leaves me with a horrid sign

My life is aging
And we're desecrating
The homes of the restless souls
Suffrage doesn't come in lulls

We suffer in this life
So take away my strife
Or die
[End Chorus]
[End Song]